The John Locke Competition prizes clear argument, original thinking, and evidence of genuine curiosity. Read each concept carefully before attempting the quiz.
An argument is not a fight — it is a claim supported by reasons and evidence. Every essay you write for the John Locke Competition must have one clear central argument, called a thesis.
A thesis answers the question directly, in one or two sentences, and tells the reader exactly what you believe and why. Everything else in your essay should support or deepen this central claim.
A strong essay follows a logical shape: Introduction → Body Paragraphs → Conclusion.
Introduction: Hook the reader with a striking observation or question, then state your thesis. Body: Each paragraph makes one supporting point, backed by evidence or reasoning. Use signpost phrases ("Furthermore," "However," "This demonstrates that…") to guide the reader. Conclusion: Do not just repeat — reflect on the broader meaning of your argument.
Claims without evidence are opinions. Strong Locke essays use: real-world examples (historical events, news, science), logical reasoning (if X, then Y…), and counterargument & rebuttal (acknowledging the opposing view then dismantling it).
You do not need a bibliography, but you should be able to explain where your facts come from if asked.
The John Locke Competition is different from school essays because it rewards philosophical depth. This means: questioning assumptions, defining your key terms, and exploring edge cases.
For example, if the question is "Is freedom more important than safety?", a philosophical thinker would first ask: What do we mean by freedom? What kind of safety? before answering.
John Locke (1632–1704) was an English philosopher who believed in natural rights: life, liberty, and property. He argued that the purpose of government is to protect these rights, and if it fails, citizens have the right to resist.
His ideas influenced the American Declaration of Independence and modern democracy. The competition named after him rewards exactly the kind of independent, evidence-based thinking he championed.
Judges award marks for: Clarity of argument, Quality of reasoning, Use of evidence, Originality, and Written expression.
They deduct marks for: padding or repetition, unsupported assertions, unclear or missing thesis, and off-topic tangents.
Eight multiple-choice questions covering the foundations. Select an answer to see immediate feedback and an explanation.
This is a realistic John Locke–style essay question. Write your response below. Aim for 600–800 words. A timer runs for your practice — there is no automatic cutoff.
Review the model essay and required concepts. These keywords and ideas should appear in a strong response — you can see how your essay compares in the next step.